Score: 6

"Random plotless and unfunny humor"

submission: Sad Larry

date: December 2, 2009

This didn't make me, laugh, smirk, anything. It was actually quite boring. Eplosm cartoons are all just random scenes that don't make sense. 12 year old humor isn't popular because it's good, it's popular because 12 year old humor is easy to make.

Score: 10

"Ain't that the indisputed truth"

submission: Shave

date: November 13, 2009

A flash about the truths of life. Such a story.

Score: 7

"Descent"

submission: king pepe

date: November 13, 2009

It was more like a funny story than a funny flash. Not much suprise or climax, just random events. Still a good watch.

Score: 8

"It's pretty good"

submission: DJ Jester - Power Of Sound

date: August 4, 2009

It sounds pretty catchy. I think you need to explore more scales and try chord progressions too. A lot of your music is simple beats attatched to simple scales, which gets you high scores. But if you want recodnizably better music, you can go deeper.

Score: 5

"Very fast tempo"

submission: Crack the Beat

date: August 4, 2009

1. Too loud for me personally. When it starts up I have to turn the speakers down.
2. The sounds at the beginning are not attractive to the ears. Try changing to something less loud and spontanious.
3. Tempo is too fast. Anything longer than a 16th note makes it sound off tempo, and anything faster makes it seem like it's going too fast. Slow down the tempo.

Turn this into either a 3 or so minute song, or shorten it up, keep a riff or two, and make it slower and more appealing would be my recommendations.

Score: 5

"Needs improvemen, but, it's a demo"

submission: Way Of Life (Demo)

date: August 4, 2009

Whether it is computer generated, or you just make it sound like that, it makes the song seem a lot less appealing.

It seems like a remix of video game music.

1. i'd recommend redoing the song, and trying to get a more classical backing symphony part, rather than a generic oe.
2. Repition is in music as it is in literature, it's a useful tecnique but used to much it makes something seem bland. Chance keys, maybe even tunings. Experimentation is the way to get yourself out of holes musically.
3. Try to put more lengh on notes, and if you are doing everything off the computer, change the sound makers. Change how the guitars sound. Overdriven doesn't sound so good when it's done for an entire song.